{"id":1722,"date":"2023-05-15T01:14:41","date_gmt":"2023-05-14T15:44:41","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/leehopkins.com\/?p=1722"},"modified":"2023-05-15T01:14:44","modified_gmt":"2023-05-14T15:44:44","slug":"week-8-power-writing-and-writing-short-and-sweet-from-week-7","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/leehopkins.com\/vi\/week-8-power-writing-and-writing-short-and-sweet-from-week-7\/","title":{"rendered":"Week 8: Power Writing (and writing short and sweet from Week 7)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Can I write succinctly and let the power of my words and sentences transport the reader to where I want them to be and think what I want them to think?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I don\u2019t think so. I find it very hard to turn a long piece of writing into something short, I am always wanting to explain further, to show yet one more example, to \u2026well, you get the idea.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Perhaps I need to take a side course in editing my writing\u2026<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I like to flatter myself and think I write well, but I probably write in an old-fashioned style. For example, I still prefer \u2018whilst\u2019 to \u2018while\u2019, \u2018write\/post a blogpost\u2019 to \u2018write\/post a blog\u2019.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I did the majority of my writing between my undergraduate degree (1994-1998), my work with one of the Murdoch web plays (1997-1999), my business communication writing (1997-2014), my writing of counselling material for my practice (2018-2020). And now this degree. That\u2019s a lot of writing, but how much of it is\/was any good? 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